Once showing my draft poster to the other two members in my group and also the subject teacher the main comments or improvements were as follows.
Firstly, it was thought the poster was too one colour driven and as 'Vivid' I should include more of a colour pallet to describe this. Also, after looking online and researching real posters, it was clear I needed to include a logo for our chosen record label company. Another addition to be made will be social media links to online marketing and feeds.